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Welcome to S.O.S. Core

This is the place where me and my freinds will be posting all of our S.O.S. issues

If you have any questions message to [Oblivian][Land_Cow]
or [stahp]

the infamous lost chapter 4 is out!Hey we've got a banner contest out so that we could get a banner up on here so please try to make one.

S.O.S. banner contest

Characters:
  Akira
Age-24
height-6 foot 2 in.
Appeirance-Dirty blonde hair Blue eyes Slightly muscular
Hobbies-Fighting drinking protecting Suichi        (has drivers license)
Tsumire
Age-23
Height-5 ft 2in
Appierance-Black hair with purple highlights green eyes curvey body type
Hobbies-reading writing and protecting Suichi(has license)
  Suichi
Age-20
Height-6ft
Appeirance- messy short brown hair brown eyes glasses freckles very skinny very pale wimpy little dork
Hobbies-video games runs away from any sign of danger(accept Akira)retarded comic books
   Maichuziko (Mai)
Age-24
Height-6 ft 1 in
Appeirance-long blonde hair honey eyes long thin legs
Hobbies-Deperatly tries to fit in shoping and cleaning
    Viper
Age-???
Height-5ft 7in
Hobbies-???
    Azumi
Age-14
Height-5ft 4in
Appeirance- medium black hair brown eyes normal body shape(for a 14 year-old) very preppy
Hobbies-Annoying people and other stuff

S.O.S. Chapter 1

S.O.S. Chapter 2

S.O.S. Chapter 3

S.O.S. Chapter 4

S.O.S. Chapter 5

[Oblivian]: So what does every one think about s.o.s.

[Bri-chan]: wow, you got talent! "Strong with the force, you are." XDD. But about the only thing I'll have to critique on is that you seem to have very little descriptions or opinions on things. Everything seems to go a little too fast, and I don't really understand who's the main character. And could you add a little background info? Not too much, just let the reader know a little bit about the group of friends. But I think that ef you wrote et in 1st person, you'd really be getting somewhere. Keep going! I wanna know what happens ^ ^

[Oblivian]: kay thanks

[islandgurl*]: AWESOME!^_^ i wish i had the talent. that was really great keep going. ^_^

[Death Dealer*]: its a really good job :D

[Rowan Gabrielle Alexandria]: Errr...I'm confused

[Oblivian]: y are u confused

[one love ride or die]: its ok

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